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[[SP] ~ Don't Leave Me Now]

Awesome! Also from Texas?? Even more awesome! :D

Very catchy track as dance tends to have! With your girlfriend rockin' the mic, y'all are a pretty sweet duo!

With that being said, try making more of an epic building with the transitions. (More/Long FX). Also at parts when she seems 'don't leave', it sounds like it's not completely synced. Also try experimenting with slicing, reverb, and delay on the vocals. Take it to the next level and this track with be awesome on the dancefloor!

Enjoy your 5/5! 9/10 =)

[ParagonX9 - Chaoz Airflow]

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10/10 5/5

I fell in love with you.. I mean it. Haha! XD

But seriously, I love making 'epic' sounding dance tracks. I will attribute any future tracks that I attempt in DnB video game style to your influence.

Thanks,
Chris

[Daddy DJ [RMX]]

Yay Daddy DJ utz utz

Daddy DJ Remix.. I love that song! :) You've got some nice ideas going for a remix, but perhaps use some more powerful synths. (Don't make the main lead a preset on z3ta+!). Also, your track is clipping crazily! Try experimenting with some stuff in the master mixer. I've gotta run but hey man.. Keep making those tunes! :)

[Once More - F-777]

Great Energy!

Absolutely loved it. :)

[Rellika - Eternion]

Enjoy your 5/5 :)

Great work man! The intro is absolutely beautiful and I feel what you did with the dance. Love the energy!! Just one thing: Don't echo the impact at 30 secs. Low range + Delay = Weird shit man. :)

[Keep it Up ~S5]

You're getting better! :)

First question: Where was the off-beat bass? It's required at some point for a kickin' dance tune man!

Pretty cool melodies you have there. Better VST usage! Maybe find a stronger synth for the alternate melody part.. it sounds a bit cheesy/campy, but hey.. some people like that! :) I have some free time to kill tonight so if you PM me your contact messengers, i may be able to help you if you get this in time!

Keep making those tunes man!

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Aw man, I really worked on that sound in the middle part. In case you're wondering, it's not a trance gate; what I did was individually write out sixteenth-note triplets. Took about a half hour actually.

About off-beat bass, I figured it's been done enough times and thought that I was recycling enough ideas for this song.

[Don't Give In]

Keep on making music please! ;)

Judging by this song, you don't have access to external VSTs yet.. Regardless, I can see your potential shining through this cloud of what I call "FL-y dance". Your melody and pattern ideas are pretty sweet. I actually started making dance myself on FL 6 and my stuff sounded similar to this. You're already using automations and mixing up your patterns/parts a bit. Good job to you sir. Keep on doing what you love! :)

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Thanks for your help! You are... completely right. I didn't use any VSTi plugins other than Sytrus and 3xOsc in this song. I've begun looking at other VSTs that I can get for free, but I'm not sure where to start looking.

[Just Hold On]

Amazing.

This is a very NewStuff.flp worthy track. I'm glad Image-Line asked you to make them this for FL Studio 9. 5/5 10/10.

Very great job guys!

[F*** You Twilight]

Can I be your friend?

Positively the song of the hour. Damnit I love this New Audio submissions section. 5/5 10/10. Rich lyrical content.

F**k you Twilight!!!!! :)

We now make a dance tune about this. haha.

DylanGlow responds:

Lol, why thank you! I really have to clean it up a bunch and I plan on doing a better future version. I'm glad you liked it though! ^_^ Thank you!

~Dylan ^_^

[Soviet National Anthem [8-Bit]]

Hahaha! XD

I wish the USA's anthem sounded as epic as this! 5/5 for the lawls!