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I don't know whats happening at 15 secs~

It's a little too unclean sounding.. I really like the crowd and energy this has though! Try taking some release off your arp-y type thing after 15 seconds too to better hear the rhythm.

This is clipping quite a bit.. lower your volume or master it a bit more. ^^

Kind of slow for the build to finally happen after 2 minutes, but it's there.. Unfortunately, there's no solid melody to follow.

8/10 and I gave you a 5 just because. Keep making tunes, ok? ^^

combatplayer responds:

lol thanks.. theres no rythm nor arp at 15sec though. its more of a flat out before the rythm really gets introduced, in the start it was meant to be a full out harddance/hardstyle track. but i made the last part anyway, couldent think of a masive melody that would fit on it. thanks for your review and score ^^

Has a happy feel to it! :D

Ooo.. Very happy song. I love it! Campy is great sometimes! ^^

Critiques.. Try using a more interesting bass! I'm a big fan of the plucks but the one at the beginning of this one could sound better.. The melody is nice to the ears!

Keep it up man! :D

pretty good so far!

Wow I love the bass. Feels awesome! :) I'm a very big fan of epic.. I enjoy make it personally.

Try not using a z3ta+ preset as the main lead though.

Keep making music, k? :)

CKC2009 responds:

the main lead isnt from Zeta :)

i never used that plugin in this song at all

try agen :)

This has a lot of potential! hehe

Keep it up alright man? :D Perhaps add more low-range in the bass and such. I like the melody! ^^

Keep making music!

Geoplex responds:

Honestly, I try to add as much bass as I can, but it never turns out the way I want it too.
I doubt Ill stop creating music anytime soon though :3

:) .

I love this loop. Very creative! :)

Wow! :)

Hey Candy,

Let me (also fairly new to Newgrounds) be the first to say welcome you guys to Newgrounds ^^! They are really a great community i've come to find in the month and a half or so i've been on.

This song is nice and is especially great for your first submission!

The synth at 1:46 is a bit loud compared to the other ones. If you want me to review more in depth then let me know ,but it's just a bunch of minor things. Great vocals! I like the pitch change that occurs later on, but perhaps it could use a more epic fill. I'll still give you full points. ^^

-- iOneofMany, Chris

CandySweden responds:

We would like a deeper review! : ) Just let us know everything, we want to know what we can do better! : ) Thanks for your review though!

Have this .rar of win! :)

That was amazing. Good job man.. It's obvious your hard work paid off! :D

Hellstick responds:

Im really glad you like it^^

^ ^

No chance in Hell I would ever.. ever FOUR this! It always deserves a five! Yeah i'm a gamer forever... gaming whatever....

Hahaha :)
5/5 10/10 Go Eirik!

^ ^

Wow! Awesome! This is a very creative remix you've started! Keep it up alright? :D

LK412 responds:

Haha thanks man :D

I love this song.

It's so damn emotional. :'(. Good melody, simple beat to tell the story. The transition to the dance part was awesome as well as the dance part itself.

5/5 10/10 For making me emotional. (No homo)

Oh and a bag of doritos. A family sized one.

"This is a Xayro Seversky remix" -- Chris

Playing with Possibility. Lithorph is my pupil. /win

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Michigan State University

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