I don't know whats happening at 15 secs~
It's a little too unclean sounding.. I really like the crowd and energy this has though! Try taking some release off your arp-y type thing after 15 seconds too to better hear the rhythm.
This is clipping quite a bit.. lower your volume or master it a bit more. ^^
Kind of slow for the build to finally happen after 2 minutes, but it's there.. Unfortunately, there's no solid melody to follow.
8/10 and I gave you a 5 just because. Keep making tunes, ok? ^^