Beautiful tune!
Pretty decent mastering going on here! Interesting track! Keep it up man! ^^
10/10 and 5'd!
Chris
Beautiful tune!
Pretty decent mastering going on here! Interesting track! Keep it up man! ^^
10/10 and 5'd!
Chris
yay happypants ^^
This gives off the same mood to me as one of the tracks i'm currently working on. "Party Hard".
It could be mastered a bit better for maximum ranges and such and louder.. but I like where you're going with this man! Keep making tunes alright? You have tons of potential! :)
9/10 and 5'd!
Chris
Thanks :D. When you finish your song send it to me and i'll check it out. Thanks for the kind words.
Hmm..
Sorry if I come off as breaking for the norm, but I don't think this is too awesome in it's entirety. It was going somewhere amazing and then hmm.. Let's see:
It has THE MOST EPIC 30 SECOND INTRO EVER and then it turns all.. mush. I don't know how this has thousands and thousands of views honestly. It's pretty cheesy and the lead is different in a not win way. It screams z3ta+ preset also.. A bit repetitive as well.
You have A LOT of potential as a musician though with potential so i'm not bashing on you. ^^ I'm just not a fan of this one besides the AMAZING intro!
To sum it up:
Intro 10/10 5/5 and some!
Overall song: 7/10 3/5
I hope you aren't insulted. ^^
Chris
You've got some skills Jake!
I love your piano melodies and and style man! The use of automations on the cutoff and etc!
This track is a little too loud though.. mildly clipping, but keep working on it! It's absolutely beautiful!
P.S: I gave you a 10 on this one, because Eternion is so Godly and I gave it a 9 /facepalm /slap. The melody of it has been sticking with me and though I think this one would be a 9, it's like me saying sorry and making it up to ya! ^^'
Eternion + Vocals would be one legendary dance tune. The thoughts crossed my mind many times, but I don't know how you'd feel about it..
Anyways, Keep making the dance tunes alright? Your work is lovely! :D
Chris
I really enjoy your work! :)
This one reminds me a bit of synthpop or something. I love your nerdy gaming tunes. I'm almost inspired to give it a shot, but I don't know..
Anyways, keep them coming. Your hard work always shows and pays off.
10/10 and 5!
Chris
Nice tune!
Nothing too original going on here.. I really like the lyrics that you added though. :D Very clean as usual. Just sounds like a commercial dance song to be honest.
The percussion added at 1:11 during the 3 beat change reminded me of my band days from when I was younger, hehe. For that nostalgia, I give you 10/10 sir. :)
Keep the tunes comin' Eirik!
Chris
Nice and honest. I like it man. Thanks =)
Yay dance muzaks
The bass sounds very Basshunter tutorial-y.. Try to look up some tutorials on YouTube or Google how to master your tracks to get fuller ranges. Melody could be a bit more interesting, but you're definitely learning!
As far as jumping into the dance genre though, I would definitely call this a dance style song. Keep making dance music man, alright? ^^
8/10 for putting hard work in it! :D
Chris
TATU IS AWESOME ^^
I really like the idea man! Tatu straight up in the Dance genre! :D I love the use of reverbs. In fact, I may have to try a remix of this just to see how it would turn out! I'm not sure if it'd be posted on NG, but it would be really fun! :D
Critiques (just writing as I go) : I liked the alternating synth in the background as well as the vocals in the intro! Lots of energy, but then.. it all kind of fades. The track is clipping quite a bit.. could be cleaner. I feel the part at 47~ secs could be a lot more interesting..
Good effort! Keep making music alright man? :)
8/10
Chris
Very clean sounding remix!
It's very clean and mastered pretty well.. Sounds like generic dance though. This one seems a bit lacking without any vocals though..
9/10 and 5 just because. ^^
Keep up the dance tracks, ok? Looking forward to some original ones! :)
Chris
Thanks, I've been in sort of a slump for the past year or so.
Lots of catchy melodies but none that developed into a song.
Hopefully that changes, thanks for listening!
I don't know whats happening at 15 secs~
It's a little too unclean sounding.. I really like the crowd and energy this has though! Try taking some release off your arp-y type thing after 15 seconds too to better hear the rhythm.
This is clipping quite a bit.. lower your volume or master it a bit more. ^^
Kind of slow for the build to finally happen after 2 minutes, but it's there.. Unfortunately, there's no solid melody to follow.
8/10 and I gave you a 5 just because. Keep making tunes, ok? ^^
lol thanks.. theres no rythm nor arp at 15sec though. its more of a flat out before the rythm really gets introduced, in the start it was meant to be a full out harddance/hardstyle track. but i made the last part anyway, couldent think of a masive melody that would fit on it. thanks for your review and score ^^
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