ioneofmany's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[its always hardest in starts]

I don't know whats happening at 15 secs~

It's a little too unclean sounding.. I really like the crowd and energy this has though! Try taking some release off your arp-y type thing after 15 seconds too to better hear the rhythm.

This is clipping quite a bit.. lower your volume or master it a bit more. ^^

Kind of slow for the build to finally happen after 2 minutes, but it's there.. Unfortunately, there's no solid melody to follow.

8/10 and I gave you a 5 just because. Keep making tunes, ok? ^^

combatplayer responds:

lol thanks.. theres no rythm nor arp at 15sec though. its more of a flat out before the rythm really gets introduced, in the start it was meant to be a full out harddance/hardstyle track. but i made the last part anyway, couldent think of a masive melody that would fit on it. thanks for your review and score ^^

[CKC - Avatar]

pretty good so far!

Wow I love the bass. Feels awesome! :) I'm a very big fan of epic.. I enjoy make it personally.

Try not using a z3ta+ preset as the main lead though.

Keep making music, k? :)

CKC2009 responds:

the main lead isnt from Zeta :)

i never used that plugin in this song at all

try agen :)

[-Speed of Light-]

This has a lot of potential! hehe

Keep it up alright man? :D Perhaps add more low-range in the bass and such. I like the melody! ^^

Keep making music!

Geoplex responds:

Honestly, I try to add as much bass as I can, but it never turns out the way I want it too.
I doubt Ill stop creating music anytime soon though :3

[Breakthrough - Marie]

Wow! :)

Hey Candy,

Let me (also fairly new to Newgrounds) be the first to say welcome you guys to Newgrounds ^^! They are really a great community i've come to find in the month and a half or so i've been on.

This song is nice and is especially great for your first submission!

The synth at 1:46 is a bit loud compared to the other ones. If you want me to review more in depth then let me know ,but it's just a bunch of minor things. Great vocals! I like the pitch change that occurs later on, but perhaps it could use a more epic fill. I'll still give you full points. ^^

-- iOneofMany, Chris

CandySweden responds:

We would like a deeper review! : ) Just let us know everything, we want to know what we can do better! : ) Thanks for your review though!

[The Voice Experiment]

Have this .rar of win! :)

That was amazing. Good job man.. It's obvious your hard work paid off! :D

Hellstick responds:

Im really glad you like it^^

[DotA Slice [LK Remix]]

^ ^

Wow! Awesome! This is a very creative remix you've started! Keep it up alright? :D

LK412 responds:

Haha thanks man :D

[Keep it Up ~S5]

You're getting better! :)

First question: Where was the off-beat bass? It's required at some point for a kickin' dance tune man!

Pretty cool melodies you have there. Better VST usage! Maybe find a stronger synth for the alternate melody part.. it sounds a bit cheesy/campy, but hey.. some people like that! :) I have some free time to kill tonight so if you PM me your contact messengers, i may be able to help you if you get this in time!

Keep making those tunes man!

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Aw man, I really worked on that sound in the middle part. In case you're wondering, it's not a trance gate; what I did was individually write out sixteenth-note triplets. Took about a half hour actually.

About off-beat bass, I figured it's been done enough times and thought that I was recycling enough ideas for this song.

[Don't Give In]

Keep on making music please! ;)

Judging by this song, you don't have access to external VSTs yet.. Regardless, I can see your potential shining through this cloud of what I call "FL-y dance". Your melody and pattern ideas are pretty sweet. I actually started making dance myself on FL 6 and my stuff sounded similar to this. You're already using automations and mixing up your patterns/parts a bit. Good job to you sir. Keep on doing what you love! :)

Sirdangolot5 responds:

Thanks for your help! You are... completely right. I didn't use any VSTi plugins other than Sytrus and 3xOsc in this song. I've begun looking at other VSTs that I can get for free, but I'm not sure where to start looking.

[F*** You Twilight]

Can I be your friend?

Positively the song of the hour. Damnit I love this New Audio submissions section. 5/5 10/10. Rich lyrical content.

F**k you Twilight!!!!! :)

We now make a dance tune about this. haha.

DylanGlow responds:

Lol, why thank you! I really have to clean it up a bunch and I plan on doing a better future version. I'm glad you liked it though! ^_^ Thank you!

~Dylan ^_^